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Friday, 22 May 2015

Thoughts Unbound!!!



They tell me its not right,
They say I am too bold,
I am not supposed to speak my mind.
They tell me not to let thoughts astray.
But my mind is unbound.
I consider it a blessing,
They call it a curse...!

I think of flying,
They chain me down.
I talk about freedom,
They teach about bounds!
I think about airing my thoughts,
They shutter down the windows of my mind!
I ask them to let me escape,
They tell me its not allowed.

Oh! lord of the world,
What is wrong with them?
You never created them with bounds,
you never shuttered their brains down.
Then why are they,
A burden unto themselves???

                                     -Aksa

                                                               
       





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13 comments:

  1. Sanaa Rizvi22 May 2015 at 19:36

    This was a beautiful depiction of underlying thoughts :)
    Beautifully penned!
    xoxo

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  2. Fireblossom22 May 2015 at 21:46

    What does this have to do with lists? Did you read the post?

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    1. Aqsa Manzoor22 May 2015 at 22:53

      It displays the list of things I wanna do, and the list of people's responses to my thoughts!.... Its a list of thoughts, read carefully dear!

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  3. Unknown23 May 2015 at 04:50

    It's awful to feel trapped in your mind, unheard. You depicted this type of frustration well.

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  4. Unknown23 May 2015 at 04:50

    It's awful to feel trapped in your mind, unheard. You depicted this type of frustration well.

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  5. Sumana Roy23 May 2015 at 07:59

    the poem reminds me of Maya Angelou's Caged Bird....a beautiful and heartfelt write Aqsa...

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    1. Aqsa Manzoor23 May 2015 at 12:37

      Thank You Sumana!
      Caged bird is indeed a wonderful write!

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  6. X23 May 2015 at 20:49

    It is all part of life, or maybe the arogance of humans. The need to impose on others what we find as acceptible. And then to keep them in the same crab pot with us. It keeps us from progressing forward. But keeps us the same.

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    1. Aqsa Manzoor24 May 2015 at 12:18

      Diversity is the essence of life, keeping us same is never gonna work out!

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  7. Amrit Sinha28 May 2015 at 18:44

    No one should have the right to chain our free thoughts ... after all, we should have the freedom to think for ourselves.

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